Ever eat cookies when the sugar was accidentally left out of the dough?
Of course, the no-sugar cookies still look and feel the way cookies are supposed to. Even when you bite into them, it’s clear something is off, even if you don’t know what or why.
PAOs, sometimes we end up pushing out content without remembering to add some sugar.
The statement you wrote? Sure, it may look and feel useful because you put the facts in the right structure. But where’s the context; the color commentary that will make it memorable? Where’s the sugar?
No-sugar cookies go in the trash. So will your no-sugar content.
(Photo by Spc. Matthew Wright, DVIDS)
